Landing Page Conversion Analysis - An Inside Look
Tuesday, September 7th, 2010
Sometimes the best way to understand how to think about improving web conversion is to walk through an evaluation of an actual landing page. Today I’d like to walk you through my approach to landing page web conversion and evaluate the website www.heyviv.com, this site sells vintage 1950’s clothing to two different groups, costumers (for example student plays, Halloween, etc.) and vintage clothing collectors. Check out the site for yourself if you are in one of these two groups, the quality and authenticity of the products are top notch.
Before evaluating any landing page it’s important to understand the upstream traffic of where visitors are coming from, how the landing page is being used. What I mean by upstream is the click right before the visitor gets to your landing page, where did they come from? What are the primary the traffic sources for your page?
This landing page is being used in a few different ways:
1. As a page within the flow of the website from a “Costume Help” link
2. As a landing page from a Google AdWords search ad
3. As a page sent from email correspondence with existing and prospective customers answering questions to people who are doing a 1950’s style show or play.
By understanding where traffic is coming from we can get a better idea of what the visitors needs and motivations might be in order to see the page through their eyes.
In each case the visitor is coming from a different place upstream and has different expectations, motivations and needs. So for each point upstream the intent is different for each user type.
The expectation from the Costume Help link – needs a bit more hand holding and perhaps they don’t know where to start or what they need.
The expectation from the search ad – is to browse 1950’s Grease costumes. They may know what they want since they are searching for a specific keyword and have an immediate need for a costume for a play that is next week.
The expectation from the email visitor – might be for more clarity on specific details of the garments, but each email may be a different case depending on the email content and context.
Each of those expectations have to be dealt with, either on the page or as 3 separate pages.
It’s easier to deal with them on separate pages because you can really focus on a single goal for the page and really target to your traffic and optimize or improve your sales and web conversions. My first recommendation is to create 3 pages to deal with each traffic source.

So let’s take a look at the page with these 3 types of users in mind. Depending on which channel a visitor is coming from upstream (search, email or help link) remember, the motivation and intent of the user will be different for each upstream point.
For this post we’ll only be examining one upstream point for the sake of simplicity and the highest impact on web conversion for HeyViv, which is the user type with the highest likelihood to buy, so let’s take a look at the AdWords search traffic, starting with the ad.
Below is the AdWords copy that is driving the most visitors to this landing page.
1950s Costumes & Vintage
Outfits for plays, parties & events
All sizes, quick ship, discounts
www.HeyViv.com
1950s Costumes & Vintage
Outfits for plays, parties & events
All sizes, quick ship, discounts
www.HeyViv.com
The landing page for these ads needs to address costumers who are looking for 1950’s outfits for a production, dance, event or play. They are there to shop because they need something and usually fast.
These visitors need more reassurance about outfits for specific plays, maybe full outfits for different characters in the play. In general there are too many options that get the visitor off track. The page needs to be designed to help this visitor group buy.
The first way this page can go about accomplishing that is by reinforcing the key points used in the ads like the words “1950s” “Outfits for plays” etc. by reusing those keywords prominently as headlines and sub headlines on the landing page your letting the visitor know the page they are on has what they are looking for. This subtle form of reassurance provides verbal ques to the visitor to help orientate them. Once a visitor clicks their anxiety level goes up. It’s like they have just been dropped off on an alien planet. Your landing page design needs to relieve this anxiety as immediately as possible so as to keep them from bouncing.
Once their anxiety level has calmed down a bit, knowing they are in the right place for what they need is the perfect time to present a strong value proposition and answer why they should buy from you over all the other options they have. This further reduces they disorientation and anxiety however you’re not done yet.
Next, you need to address some of their buying concerns upfront. Remember all you’ve done so far if you followed the advice so far is slightly reduce their anxiety level; you haven’t begun to sell to them yet. At this point they need to know you have the 1950’s clothing they need, is it right for what they need it for and how much does it cost. Currently the landing page does not list any prices, forcing the visitor to pogo-stick back and forth from this page to the product detail page and vise versa. By forcing them to click back and forth you’re not making it easy for them to buy.
Once product and price have been addressed on a newly redesigned landing page, the page still has even more work to do to make more sales. At this point your visitor has decided not to leave, at least not to leave just yet. You’ve gotten past the first 3 seconds, so it’s time to continue to reduce their anxiety and reassure them that buying form you is safe. You’re page design’s next step is to continue down the selling path by addressing concerns like – shipping policy, return policy, etc. Remember the visitor hasn’t decided they want to buy yet. Your design needs to accomplish all of these things on the landing page itself so as not to lead them off the buying path.
The key to increasing web conversions on your landing page is to put the visitors goals at the center of your design and help them buy from you. When you approach web conversion from the point of view of your visitors buying process you can clearly see what needs your visitors require and in what order you must satisfy them in order to increase your online conversion rate.
Let’s take a look at an example from Homedepot.com There’s a dangerously large amount of white space above the product details on this page. For a decision maker that is about to spend $800 on a snowblower you’ll want to know a lot more than just the information that HomeDepot shows you above the fold here. There’s so much white space at the fold line that a prospect may not feel there is more information below the fold.
Building on the first principle of designing for conversion and the fold this page can easily be adjusted to take advantage of persuasion and help the future owner of an $800 snowblower to make his purchase with a bit more confidence and reassurance that he’s spending his money wisely.
Buying a product online has always been an isolated experience. The closest it has gotten to social shopping so far has been reading reviews of other people you didn’t know. That was good and we loved it. The collective knowledge allowed us to get a better sense of the quality of the product and Amazon made it easy for us by comparing the worst review and the best review side by side. Don’t get me wrong, reviews and rating systems are great and they clearly have an impact for online conversion rates. But we’ve entered into the age of the social web and that’s going to change things. We have to change the way we think about social e-commerce shopping and online conversion. We need to re-engineer persuasive design in this new social space.




One way to reduce the anxiety your prospect faces at this moment is to use trustmarks to reduce some anxiety in the mind of your prospect and support their decision to buy from you. Trustmarks can include credit card security seals (Is this a safe place to give my credit card information?) Credibility images like a better business bearer seal, Trust-e, Hackersafe, (Is this a legitimate website? Will there be a problem before I even get my product or after?) testimonials, guarantees, etc. These types of trustmarks all help to lower the anxiety level of your prospect but it’s not enough to just have them on your web page. They need to be designed into the thought process that is going on in the mind of your prospect at the right time, when they are concerned about it and in the right place. It doesn’t help to have them stuffed in the footer of your site on every page or in an area where your prospect needs to scroll to see them at the exact point in their buying process when they need them. These trustmarks need to be in close proximity to the area in which the anxiety rises. They need to be designed not just into the site but into the buying process. A single trustmark image at the right time and place can dramatically increase your sales and decrease your shopping card abandonment rates along with other cognitive psychological factors that should be at the core of all design.